An old fashioned ghost story

Hello everyone, yes I wrote and posted this this morning on the Collegium home page. I'll copy it to the main blog later. Do have a look and tell me if it's very cringe-worthy, trying to pass muster with the old spooky tale-telling.

An old fashioned ghost story

I'm trying to write one of these as a nice surprise for the choir blog. Think it may take me a few weeks. I'm basing it on the style of Rudyard Kipling and Robert Graves so it's coming out with a fake 'olde' style, and I'm enjoying it so far. But as usual I have no plot. I really acquire get a better approach to plotting. Maybe I'll do a short story writing course at some point to get myself on the ball in this respect.