Ah, the final lyrical piece has arrived this morning and the secret of the song is suddenly revealed.
Where are they going,
where were they from,
passengers electrified
on tramcar 41?
How to punctuate these lines causes me a bit of a dilemma - the above version makes the most grammatical sense - but the below makes more song sense:-
Where are they going,
where were they from?
Passengers electrified
on tramcar 41.
Anyone got any thoughts on punctuation when writing out lyrics as opposed to poetry?
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